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ugly beast
     useless mutt
   scum dragged in from the gutters,
a failure.
       Yet through your stinking airs,
              why would I ever forget
                       how you smiled at the foot of the stairs?
©2008-2010 *grau-gestreift
:icongrau-gestreift:

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One of the assignments in Writer's Workshop. We had to use the last line in a poem, so...ta.
A tribute to my doggeh. :<
-snugs Lara-

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:iconchickenpoxferret:
LOL ITS MY LIFE STORY.
c:
u re such a pwnful writer. -jelis-
IM IN A GOOD MOOD.
YOU GET FANART.
:iconkougrakrazy:
this is like...wow O:
i love the last three :heart:

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'You can eat the grass?'
'Of course you can! Everything in this ROOM is eatable. Even I'M eatable! But that is called canipalism, my dear children, and is in fact frowned upon in most societies.'
:iconrainbowstitch:
aww, i can imagine the doggeh smiling at everyone as they push 'im away. >:
you're a really good writer, jeez. write moar. D:<
:iconchelly-kinz:
Aww I really like this D: <3

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your just not cool enough to look at this: [link]
:iconhauntingmewithsmiles:
:crying: depressing yet cute.

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"You impersonate a person better than a zombie should."
--Company
PHOTOS. STOCK.

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:iconyoru-rose:
i rly like this was the last line given r did you write it?

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I'll cut you!....With *.:LoVe:.*
:iconhoundoomed:
Beautifully writen. And you don't know how honestly happy I am that an artist as talented as yourself is also capable of writing. Seriously - that pleases me to absolutely no end. It's so simple, too - light yet profound. It doesn't seem forced at all or like you're trying to STRESS STRESS STRESS a point. Actually, it's quite refreshing!

Lovely, my lovely. :hug:
:iconzenirixwolf:
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-hugs Lara too-


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Just a bit explosive...
:icongrau-gestreift:
D:
-snugs ghostLady-


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